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relish tray



relish tray empty
by the time turkey is served-
stuffed before dinner



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ta-da- 5/7/5

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  • Ellis gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Very clever


  • azure85 gold member
    November 16, 2007

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    relish tray empty
    by the time turkey is served-
    stuffed before dinner

    This is so true! Yummy snacks and then the turkey, and too late for the tummy! Thank you for a great Thanksgiving-ku!


  • micol
    November 16, 2007

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    True...and well done; sound patterns contribute nicely to the syllable count, and the slight shift in meaning from 'turkey'[stuffe] to [human] 'stuffed' is fun.