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Breakthrough Mountains



I’m gonna take that mountain
Stone by stone, if I must
It’s comin’ down!

I was born a stubborn soul
With a will only God can give.
In pieces or by the whole,
I’m gonna take that mountain down
If I have to stone by stone
It’s comin’ down!

I’m breaking through to healing
On the other side of this pain
No matter how I’m feeling
I’m gonna take that mountain down
With His hand on mine
It’s comin’ down!

The gift of faith as small as dust
Can lift that mountain into the seas
Pressing through, I must!
We’re tearin’ this mountain down
In Christ all things are possible
And this mountain’s comin’ down

These rocks aren’t singin’ for me
No, I praise for what is coming
‘Cause on the other side is victory
We’re gonna take this mountain down
If we have to stone by stone,
It’s comin down!



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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    April 1, 2008
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    Excellent

    Ah, a fine write indeed, which is very well expressed with good imagery.


  • hopeleslytaken
    February 2, 2008
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    :)

    Wow. I haven't read your stuff in a long time and I'm so glad I just did. Holy balls, girl. This is so great. I love it. And spiritually, it's wonderful. And I love it. How many more times can I say that I love it? Lol. Cause I do.

    P.S. How are you, kid?


  • Bungalow Bill
    January 7, 2008
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    Great poem, well focused as usual.....