this face in that mirror is there
not there but here and is laughing
at what sits in the back of my teeth
so colour it red light green night
as seasons begin to birth on verde
eyes(that fill me with sin) I paint
a canvas to lay the world down next
to you(while I count sheep 1,2,3)and
wait for tommorrow to find yesterday
still counting A,B,C safely sound asleep
are two thoughts(you and I)hide behind a
hush of words waiting for once upon a time
A contest entry
- Think Abstract by Jfd.
600 points, ended November 29, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sweet poem! I love the imagery and word choice! Great job! Keep it up!
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The first two lines didn't sit well with me, I didn't like it at all, however once I got to the second stanza the poem picked up momentum and I found it very interesting and wanted to keep reading till the end....the last three stanzas are amazing!
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