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Acrostic Scale

Chords,  like clusters of sweet grapes, squeezed together
Doke, yet biting as the fiery liquid warming the throat
Expressions of  ecstasy while   the music plays on
Fermata,  to prolong the pleasure and romance ignited
Grave times and happy times, both affecting the heart
Accelerando, our blood pumping, nearing the crescendo
Baroque or modern, what matters is if it touches the soul.

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  • HerbalGoat
    November 24, 2007

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    I like how you made the acrostic a musical scale; very clever. I like your use and the tone of it all. Great job!

  • Justin3
    November 17, 2007
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    Very well written poem, keep it up!