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Light giver..

  

Like a lovesick bird of the sea
Beating her wings and feathers
She flew off between the eagles
Breaking free to this world of the unseen
Empowered only with hope
Seeking divine heights
Losing herself in the mountains
With her face toward the sun
She felt the warmth of the rays  
Her heart floods with melodies
of inner peace..warmth
Hoping to find a garden of red roses
In the ground where only lovers meet
In the shadow of passion
Where they tell their sighs
Where with ghazal begin their love story
All the way until dawn
The chorus of music fills the heavens
The songs of tender souls meeting
She came all the way across the oceans
To find this wealth of the divine
Lost in this infinite beauty
She became the giver of hope..
The giver of light when the sun
wanders away every night..

 

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  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    November 18, 2007

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    This is beautiful. It is so light and full of positivity and love. A very special write for those who have found these things, and those who hope to find it.


  • Gwenevere
    November 16, 2007

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    This was a beautiful piece of work.Well done to you for showing the light and I hope it reflects on you too, Ros


  • creationsfromheart
    November 16, 2007

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    Aw....Sighs.... written with beauty and heart felt, I could feel the warmth spoken from the words. The picture also works nicely with this poem, Reminds me of magic sprinkles of hope! Awsome write!


  • yourbentangel
    November 16, 2007
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    absolute

    This was very beautiful and very much what I am looking for. Thank you very much for entering


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 16, 2007

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    BREATHTAKING!!!!

    What lovely words! There are indeed ones in this world who do reach out and give to all the beauty which they hold within their hearts and souls. A beautiful write my friend


  • poetryality silver member
    November 16, 2007

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    This is indeed a hopeful poem that is filled with light. You are the "giver" with these words poet. A very ethereal poem is written here, giving the reader wings to fly.


    "She became the giver of hope..
    The giver of light when the sun
    wanders away every night.."


    Such a peaceful ending to a stunning poem. I wish you the best in the contest.



    Much Love & Many Blessings ♥

    Renee


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 16, 2007
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    Such sweet serenity!

    this piece leaves me with a feeling of peacefulness,masterfully penned! lots of luck in contest!


  • penman gold member
    November 16, 2007

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    Excellent

    Oh my such a beautiful creation you have penned. Fill with great feelings and wonderful images. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Peteskid gold member
    November 15, 2007

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    lovely poetry, touching and connecting in the deeper senses, in the inner person....so very well done showing in wonderful imagery....PK

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