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when red walls fall...

A great red wall…
Is located in me…
I feel it there…
Full of grafiti...
Covered in words…
I can’t understand…
It moves with me…
I fear it falling…
I try to brace it…
But its too heavy…
This wall is filled…
With eons of hate…
With so much love…
With fear and doubt…
With joy and comfort…
This large wall…
Is my foundation…
I pray it lasts…
But I know it wont…
Bits and pieces stray…
Pebbles come loose…
It hurts just knowing…
This great wall will fall…
Killing me…

wall = heart... if you didn't know...

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  • lostemotions
    November 17, 2007

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    Amazing write! Hold in there sweety! You are very strong... I know you can make it through! I hope things will over come and be placed back to where they should be! You can handle anything that comes towards you... even if you feel it fallin it will just fall for a short while till you get ahold of it all again! If i am wording this wrong I don't know but i know your an amazing person with a great talent to overcome anything and everything