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sushi

this life within our fishbowl
(with wide eyes blinking back)
leaves us to roam aimlessly
with a code we just can't hack.

Most of us wont find
what were looking for.
although there's not much to find
in a fishbowl.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    December 6, 2007
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    An original look at life within a glasshouse.

    short but very prophetic.
    well done.


    • BeautifulChaos44
      December 6, 2007
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      thank you for the comment! i havent gotten a comment in MONTHS! it means alot to me