The wide open sky
unfolds through the facts.
And an eagle soars through my pain
(and guilt)
Parting it with her powerful wings.
The soft gental breeze
places kisses
-(blown away)- on my cheek.
Leaving the waves to mist my lips with solitude.
The sound of beating hooves
pound my anger untill it bleeds,
and Earth beneith me holds me strong.
While the passing glimmer of hope
taunts me to loosen up from her grasp.
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o man... idk about this one guys
Please tell me what you think
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I can see this one being extended quite a bit.
it has the beginning of a very strong piece, one that could be lengthened quite a bit.
keep working on this one. I'd like to see the result.
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