Live now
Live for the present
life certainly can be pleasant
for times its not
listen ,watch
Just remember live for the present
Live for the present time goes on
Even things you thought were gone
Live for the present
Nothing will change
the past cant rearrange
Live for the present
its not that hard
Horrid times;disregard
live for the present
please oh please
everyone agrees
Living for the present
is for the best
Living ,watching waiting
the past may soon be fading
Author notes
notsotorturedartist
A contest entry
- PRE-WRITES! ROUNDS CONTEST!!! by Luminescence.
525 points, ended March 23, 2008, 176 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
how is it?
Comments
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you really like to repeat things over and over don't you lol... but I think this time it was used a lot more correctly than the previous ones that I have read of yours.
Title- 9
Diction-8
Syntax-7
Wowness factor- 7
Total- 31... your best yet.
Thank you so much for entering and participating in my contest and good luck,
~lumin
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