Something so beautiful
bing sculpted by the wind.
A need to live,
yet a want to feel.1
Something so beautiful,
eyes become gorgeous
just by glancing.2
Shades of blue
and shades of white
are the first beauties
of this natural delight.3
Slowly goes from
blue to red and then
glorious gold is led.4
A glorious sparkling painting
created by god as it shines
with crystals stuck on
its levitating back.5
Tomorrow will turn
red, gold, and black again
While gods face hold a grin.
A contest entry
- Sound in Poetry by jocelynclaire.
400 points, ended December 13, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful use of colour imagery, but the use of sound escapes me (?). Thank you for entering, best of luck!
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Very nice poem, I think you have a fantastic chance in this contest. Well written.
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This is beautiful
You do have a fantastic way of bringing life to the wonders of the world
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