Intense and exciting
Lips and eyes
And hands and sighs
So why is she crying?
This girl's lonely
This girl's crazy
In this, most intimate of moments
She's so very alone
No matter how close he presses
How tight he hugs her
She doesn't feel anything
Crying into his shoulder
Sliding back into her dress
Can't you see that she's terrified?
Fingernails dig in
If she lets go she just may
Shake apart
She is shaking
And it isn't the cold
No, she doesn't feel the cold
Too wrapped up in her mind
In the sudden epiphany that
I can't do this
I can't be this
Everything is moving
Too far
Too fast
The ciggarette in her hand lies forgotten
Ash inching it's way up
Perhaps even burning her before she gives up
Stubs it out
And cries some more
Curled up in her own world
His touch is a shock
She jerks at his hand
Soft and cold
Against her back
Curling tighter into herself
As his arms wraps
Trying so desperately
To offer comfort
But there is none to be had
In the arms of the unknowing aggressor
I'm so sorry
Whispered again and again
In his ear
As he nods
Telling her it's alright
He just wants to be there for her
To offer what comfort he can
Author notes
Rough night
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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W-O-W
this is REALLY intense!!
i like it
i like the spacing between the lines...it kind of keeps the reader thinking "WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!"
its full of emotion and wow...sorry hun *huggles*
yeah rough night i'd say!!
great write!

