I see him
He sees me
The knife in my hand is ready to strike
But I wait for something
Particular words to come
He grabs me and begins to talk
It's too late
The knife has lunged itself into his heart
And he falls grasping a note in his hands
I watch his pain and take the note
It seems to unfold itself
I read with tears in my eyes
For on the note were those words
The words he never had a chance to say
Those words were
I love you.....
Author notes
Don't push you man away befor he has a chance to say what he needs to. Don't push anyone away untill they say what they need to. Just wait.
ok tell me the truth
Comments
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if only the girl i like would just read this poem and stop thinking she's a bad influence on me and stop pushing me away. the poem is sorta good i guess but has a great moral behind.
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its not a bad poem. I liked it. The message behind it is good. short and sweet is your style isn't it? I like this poem a lot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ok yeah its not the best poem and its not the worst but yeah tell me an honest opinion.
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