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"Clear"

Right here under this rock
lies good ole Jerckin Hiscock.
With one final stroke
he started to choke
as his heart failed from the shock.

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Had to, sorry.
Hey, he was German!

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  • ScarletO
    November 17, 2007

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    OLOLOL Wooo,,,you out did yourself in this one. Love your wittiness.

  • Desire gold member
    November 16, 2007

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    OMG!!



    Oh My Word
    Congratulations on Your green shiny and loved this one You penned
    -throws confetti-
    Wooooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
    Wonderful rhyme!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Poetic Talent!
    Best wishes to You in all You do
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • WarrioroftheHeart
    November 15, 2007

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    Very funny Storm, congratulations on the HM. Its well deserved.
    I'm almost frightened to say that this rolls of the tongue really easily

  • SoulWhispher
    November 15, 2007

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    LOL

    Don't know why but I liked it, it brought a smile to my face and laughter to my soul, great job, John


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 15, 2007

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    LMAO!!!! Oh my..ya'll are killing me!!! This is too funny! Thanks and good luck!

  • Grey Mouser
    November 15, 2007

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    LOL, someones having way too much fun with "hiscock" the poor fellow. Very funny, well done! Best to you in the contest.

    Mouser

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