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We held each other so tightly
crossing countries, forging new paths
we conquered
abandoned hilltops

tree skeletons guide us
with curved branches, gilded leaves
of perfect grace
we discover webs, deep connections
hidden just beneath the surface

losing all sense of time
among shelves of the past
we clutch frozen memories
balancing on desolate railroad tracks

For a few precious moments
we study the symphony of the stars
listening carefully to wishes
whispered gently in breezes
and feeling infinity
in the spaces between our fingers

Sealing a secret with a first kiss—
a promise I’ve never been happier
to keep.

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  • Mirrors shard
    November 15, 2007
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    beautiful piece, i love the wording and images


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 15, 2007
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    Very nice write here


  • Prison of Lyme
    November 15, 2007
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    sweet

    very nice piece.

    take care,
    Poirsbaby


  • lilAj
    November 15, 2007
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    truly a wonderful write!... it brought back memories I almost forgot I had


  • aligurl
    November 15, 2007
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    I loved it

    I can definately realte. An amazing heartfelt piece. Beautiful.

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