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[ Sympathy translated ]

Sympathy translated
into empathy
and all you wanted was understanding

tap tap tap
morse code on yourself

we don't want your pity
just clean nails
just a voice

unmovable and desperate
but i got my left foot

sympathy translated
into pity
all i wanted was a needle
all i wanted was an ending

sympathy translated
into disgust
all i wanted was a gun

Author notes

im not paralyzed. i do not tap tap tap.

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  • Menace
    January 10, 2008
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    I really liked this one! No complaints other than I can't stop reading it over and over.