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Dance of The Lovers

MOVEMENT 1: Lovely lonely girl
You stand alone for your beautiful solo
Your music sings directly to my very soul
Your tone is brilliant, yet oh no!
your theme is so lonely, stacatto
and I then my eyes meet yours

MOVEMENT II: Love conquers all
Your infectuous tune drifts across my mind
I hum the the accompaniment to your song
I find myself in this binary bind
A formata to symbolize just how long
I'll harmonized by your side

Movement III: Change is Imminent
A chord is struck as a trio is played
and I get the dissonant part you say
into the distant my music must fade
this may be my cadance, fade away
(yet my need for you still grows)

Movement IV: Time Heals All Wounds
Your beauty sings to my heart
to me a familiar and loving melody
Your heart and mine connected long ago
and now it's the fourth movement
the climax, the finale, I love you
Tutta


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  • HerbalGoat
    November 24, 2007

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    Very nicely done. Some of the words, though, require helping verbs and what not, but either way, they were incorporated beautifully!