In this fossilized body
I can not move for love for hate
Im frozen by you
No more time for hate
You froze me with your gaze
Of one who will forever love
One who I won’t
Betray
Author notes
prompt Paralyze
this is a very random poem
hope its ok
A contest entry
- ///Prompt/// by Never.Give.Up.
525 points, ended November 27, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you really think
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Short, sweet and it holds your attention.
The only thing that brought it down in my opinion was the lack of comers and full stops, which I believes makes or breaks a piece of writing.
But well done and keep writing with great ideas.
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Nice take on the prompt goodluck in the contest.Much love
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very powerfull angel so much feeling.Well done and good luck. I love you
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wow ,your random poems are some of ur best ,well done
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this is good sis i love you
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