The girl's hardcore
She's cliche'
She's Myspace
Catch the right light
And she's terrified
She hides it well
Disappearing in surprised eyes
If you look close she's lovely
If you look close she's ugly
Girl's got potential
Don't think she's real though
Choking on pride
But it's only a show
Wishes for serenity
Pass her by as she's holding too tight
As she wants to let go
And she's all but insanity
Kissing your tears
And tasting their lies
She tastes nothing but salt
Her body is the rhythm of deception
Running it's course in her veins
Like a drug
Own personal heroin
Strung out
Knock down drag out
Kiss the wind and hold me close
And the reply is simply this
Why?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like it. it had a really good flow to it and the message was great. its as if i know you, considering i have a friend just like this. anywayz, keep writing, it was good.
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nice poem... Ive read some poems like this one... hmmm...
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HMMMMMMMMM
Very, very nicely penned!!!!!! I adore it!!! Keep em comin, and keep on penning! It looks so good on you!!!!!!!!
sweet
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Confused
Where does the duality collide or does it? I loved this piece though. Very moving,, thank you!
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