i cry out in agony
your words, a piercing dagger to the heart
my tears flow steadily now
rivers flowing rapidly south
to make a growing puddle at my feet
we cannot gain back what was lost
can't take back words spoken
photographs just painful reminders
of what once was
this one i toss aside
that first kiss was total bliss
the sky was dark
the night air chilled
but we were lost in the moment
electricity flowed between us
that of attraction and love
but you poured water upon that current
making it explode
your transparent lies of deception
what you were pretending to do
who you would pretend to be
all lies, daggers to our love
you left a tattoo upon my heart
a scar that will never go away
Please tell me what you think
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emotional
Excellent choice in words and use of them. -
this is so sad , who hurt you this much. the tears I even felt in my own heart
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awww i like this if their being mean be poetic right back, love has a scar in every stage but it's up to you to control that scar from getting wrose but I'm here *hug mom wolf* its me cub!
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