beaten and broken
though you may be
you still stand tall
give in you will not
for even though
they break your body
leaving it in painful pieces
then cannot beat you completely
your heart and soul shall remain
Please tell me what you think
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beautifully written
truthfully, short & powerful...excellent write! -
my heart goes out to people who have felt the pain of abuse ... I hope you never becoome broken
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wow this was really good!!!!!!!! I like how you use your feelings in the pice and the importance of it! Goo job and I'm Cub
anyway your a good poetic no mistake there mate 
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