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Broken Road

the road ahead is broken
and although the pieces
may come together at times
there's always that slight chance
that it will fall apart again
for the crack always remains
time will help to repair it
but one slip of the ground
out from underneath
will leave the road broken again

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  • songstress80
    December 13, 2007
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    truth written

    again, powerful work in short poems...you're very good at that


  • Poet-of-the-shadows
    November 15, 2007
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    beautifully written so much left unsaid.