have you ever surrendered
to the words itching beneath
your ink-stained fingertips,
or allowed uncensored memories
to stand alone-- vulnerable to
the harsh eyes of critics--
and been entirely unafraid
of the bullets?
Author notes
33 words.
oh, I forgot. I'm always down for a solid critique. ♥
A contest entry
- Have you ever...? by Exodus.
2550 points, ended November 27, 2007, 38 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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congrats on the trophy...deserves it with powerful expressions
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The essence of writing poetry caught in image and phrase.
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Oh wow. I love this! You always write such brilliant pieces but I think you excell in these shorter writes. You pack so much in while still leaving us with enough room to breathe. Thank you hun
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-to stand alone-- vulnerable to
the harsh eyes of critics--
yup. many times.
-and been entirely unafraid
of the bullets?
sometimes.
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girlll. me too.
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