Her eyes were so arousing
as if they were two scoops
of luscious chocolate,
I so wanted to consume.
Watching her red lips
shine as if strawberry,
checks a milky skin
reminding me of Vanilla.
At last after countless toppings
in sweet fudge dripping words,
we mixed our flavors.
They froze together in such
perfect blended taste.
But sadly the warm
from misunderstandings
melted our love sundae.
Next time I guess
that I look for a cone
for myself
who hadn't been licked
by so many other tongues.
Author notes
prompt - Ice Cream Love
A contest entry
- P.I.F Quickie by JustxThexBeginning.
900 points, ended November 16, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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yeah... the last stanza... so true... lol... the imagery was really good... you described this girl well... thanks for entering and the best of luck to you..
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Oh My Word!!
I had to chuckle at this piece penned for You had me rolling
Wonderful take on the prompt!!
Keep that quill dancing Sweetness
Loved this!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you precious for the touch upon my heart with your words.
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This poem was enticing, slightly erotic and funny all at once , thanks for sharing ypur lovely poems with us uncle!!!
your ap niece
Di
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Thank you my dear niece for you great comments.
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