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Finalization

You stare at your screen.
Refresh. Refresh.
Waiting for some words of comfort.
Refresh. Refresh.
Wanting something to say, “It’ll be okay.”
Refresh. Refresh.
New Message.
Click with eagerness attached.
Loading Anguish.
“I’m here for you. Obligation.
Loyalty. It’s called
Loyalty. I have Courtney.
I’m not yours. We are…”
Sniffle. Sniffle.
“Over. Maybe IF
Courtney and I don’t
Last, but I want us to.
Don’t count on
It. I belong to
Another.”
Drip. Drip.
“I know it hurts.
I know you love me.
I know you made a mistake.
But,
I also know
Where my heart lies.
It’s not in your house.”
Ruffle. Ruffle.
“And Chelsea.
JUST.
LET.
GO.
Or wait indefinitely…
Because as long as I am
Loved. By Courtney.
You won’t have me.”
Sob. Sob.
“I still care about you.
I still love you.
But only as a friend.
You can’t erase the
Future.
I. Am. No. Longer.
Yours.
Courtney has my devotion.”
Send new message.









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  • Nuage
    December 4, 2007

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    Ooh this was most fabulous i must say.
    "Click with eagerness attached.
    Loading Anguish."
    It's so true, articulated well.
    Take care of Courtney cause she's a ledgee innit!

    • Eots
      December 4, 2007
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      You said:
      "ledgee innit"



      What's that?
      Forgive my lack of comprehension.

      ~Asa of the Gremlins of Change


  • Remember3
    November 28, 2007
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    Woa. This is awesome........tears...


  • doyouloveit
    November 26, 2007

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    interesting my friend you wrote something wonderful and i love the writing style here pretty intense piece full of a very touching emotional story of love really enjoyed this piece


  • butterflytears
    November 15, 2007
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    i like the way you wrote it...the refresh. refresh. thing...that was awesome!


  • MarriedToTheDevil
    November 15, 2007
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    makes me sad

    xx


  • look for tomorrow
    November 15, 2007
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    i'm so so sorry


  • Emm Jayy
    November 15, 2007
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    ooo I know the refresh refresh feeling!!!!!
    I do it all the time...
    BUT I like it.


  • invisiblescars
    November 15, 2007
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    That's harsh, has so much emotion telling a story of many years


  • -CrimsonTears-
    November 15, 2007

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    *crys tears of blood*
    i know...
    i give up
    as long as you and cassie are happy
    i'll be ok
    but i give up


  • Izu
    November 15, 2007
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    LOL i love it the whole computer voice said it the whole time in my head


    • November 15, 2007
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      gosh your a dork at things Alex....comments that is...lol

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