While walking along
My life's path
I came across a point
Where stood two opposite roads
Got confused
As one was charming
The other thrond
First with a poor end
Latter"s end lovely
Got much confused
One evil but luxurious
Other divine in spirit
Path of virtue
Ah! but thrond
An' then I walked
Towards the paining road
But full of peace
Full of wounds
But the real comfort
An' then iwalked along
Got bleeded though
But found my destiny
Found my comfort
My peace at heart
An' my real joy!
Author notes
The way I found was the way to good but difficult as the virtues are. An' I'ii suggest you the same
A contest entry
- November New Member Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended December 7, 2007, 83 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for entering
The eternal battle of making the right choice. Nicely penned.
Good luck - let the ink flow and your fingers dance
Rosemary -
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G'Day Tragedy Lover
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Strong penned. I like the flow and imagery you created for the readers. Great ending
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~AJ
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Welcome to All Poetry
Thank you for this entry in our contest. You have penned some most interesting thoughts and vivid images in this. It certainly is difficult knowing which is the right road.
All the best to you
Gaylene
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This poem was a little hard to follow - but when you take the time to really read it - it is enjoyable. I am just learning also the real art of writing. Good job.
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Fair
I find this poem confusing and hard to follow. The imagery follows no pattern and takes the reader on a bumpy ride to make any sense of the whole thing. Good try but could be better I sense the talent underlying this poem. You english is a bite rocky.
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