Her limp body I hold in my arms,
As the tears fall from my eyes,
She took her life,
Because we weren't aloud to love,
One another.
I just hold her wondering why,
Why did you do this baby?
I loved you so,
Nothing would have changed that.
Her body lays motionless,
And I fall down to my knees,
Holding her face,
I kiss her one last time,
And whispered softly good-bye.
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A contest entry
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300 points, ended November 19, 2007, 12 entries
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awe! vey good and sad and sweet and basiclly str8 to the point i love u more!
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50 words please.
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wow damn
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You write such wonderful poems really sad and moving fantastic
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argh, so sad. I love it.
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