This contest's going to make me think
My simple rhymes are bound to stink!
I've been accused of wasting ink
HOPE THESE CAPITALS MAKE YOU BLINK!
I can't think of a sensible thing to say
Hope this little "block" soon fades away
So now I'll bid you all good day
Please forgive my lack of muse, I pray.
A contest entry
- Comment poems by cricketjeff.
900 points, ended November 29, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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My rhymes are bound and determined to suck,
but I said "to hell with it, what the f***"
and I am here to learn and play
even though better poets shall slay.
It's a wonderful way to earn lots of points,
but it places a lot of stress on your finger joints.
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Your rhyming isn't too bad at all
I'm glad you gave the contest a call.
The more comments the better from you and me
as we eagerly anticipate, the winner to be!
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Potanical Ann, I like your verse,
whether it be long or terse.
You write so well, it makes me smile
at the ease and eloquence of your style.
If a trophy you don't receive,
I will be the first to grieve. -
The ease and fluency of your rhyme
proves that you're not wasting time.
In the garden of your verse, Potanical,
the flowers you grow are not botanical.
You grow, instead, odes and sonnets;
poems adorned with Easter bonnets.
So keep your garden free of weeds
and cultivate more poetry seeds!
Cheers,
Bill
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Thank you for writing such eloquent rhyme
Have you entered this contest?
If not, that's a crime.
Your words are worthy of a mighty gong
Think about it Bill, don't leave it too long.
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Don't worry potanical poet,
You'll soon see,
That rhyming poems,
Are as fun as can be!
You seem to have,
The hang of rhyme,
So sit back, relax,
And have a good time!
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Yes I like to rhyme, that's for sure,
as long as I won't be a bore.
So I'll keep it short and keep it sweet
and hopefully your attention keep!
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I have to do this and shout hay
your rhyme does not stink
what i wanted to firstly say
you write in pen golden ink
somtimes things which are new
seem to be harder to do
does not apper that way to you
your words stick out like stuck with glue.
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Thank you so much my dear friend
my best wishes to you I now send.
This contest is proving so much fun
will be interesting to know who has won!
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Potanical, your the last that I've seen
But, don't take that at a loss
It seems I've found a rockin little poet.
Contrary-wise to you, your rhymes are boss!
And, as for your lack of muse,
I think it's safe to say,
Competing in Jeff's comment contest
Will melt your black writer's block away!
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I seem to be on form today
Thanks for your rhyme, it's made my day.
Good luck with all your writing too
and may I say "how do you do!"
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This is a cun thing we do
Come on in and we'll show you
To sit and rhyme in this game
Look around we're all the same
Rhyming is not my cup of tea
but having fun it is with me
So don't be so harsh on yourself
Of this rogue will turn you into an elf -
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Thank you Riftkin, for your words so wise,
all these comments are a nice surprise.
Let's hope we can go on for ever
with rhyming comments, oh so clever! -
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With Jeff our host
He is the most
Rhyming King he truly is
So, shall we call him The Rhyme Wiz? -
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He certainly is a rhyming wizard
from his little toe up to his gizzard!
As a host he truly is the most
Well done Jeff! we'll drink a toast! -
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That we will my dear friend
Now what do you wish to be the end
A glass of wine, what you say
Or just forget and continue to play
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i feel like this a lot about contests thats i dont enter many xx
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Potanical you're telling fibs!
Your rhymes are sure to tickle ribs
So read the other comments strings
And And the just let your muse take wings
I've no idea who'll be the winner
Someone fat or someone thinner
But I hope you give a decent go
And have lots of silly rhymes on show
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Will do my best as well you know
so poetic thoughts of mine can flow
Some lines may seem a little lumpy
so if I don't win, I won't be grumpy!
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If you're like me,
You'll become quite free.
Rhymes won't be lumpy
And you won't be grumpy.
You'll get to know
How to make it flow
You may even borrow rhymes
Not considered major crimes. -
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No need to worry
we all have our lumps,
noone is all hunky dory
as all get ocassional stumps.
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I think that rhyming is an art,
especially when it's from the heart.
So keep on penning at your leisure
to read your comments is such a pleasure.
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Blushing at your comment sweet
you write so well indeed
I am glad that we could meet
as friends in this contest lead.
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But try not to get the mumps
You'd lose your energy for rhyme
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I had the mumps when I was small
chicken pox, measles, I had them all.
Now when coughs and colds sometimes make me ill
I open a packet and take a pill
(strictly legal ones of course)
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