Have you ever
swallowed down
what the doctor gave you,
only to find
what you thought was helping
was just a placebo?
Author notes
You know I want an honest opinion, did you really think i wouldn't enter this contest??? haha
A contest entry
- Have you ever...? by Exodus.
2550 points, ended November 27, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I was expecting you to enter, what kind of HYE contest would it be without you
Of course I think this is great, funny considering how many pills I've taken because the doctor has told me to. Course I'm always sceptical. Thanks hun
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Short but sweet and I LOVE short poems!!!
Especially when they can say so many things with so little words...
GREAT JOB!!!
And yes, I have felt this way many a time.



