I wish I had wings like this
darling angel
Over the prison walls that
hold me I would fly
I would fly straight into
the arms of my children
And there I would stay
till I die
In a list
A contest entry
- Wings... by Lola Green.
430 points, ended November 16, 2007, 24 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is so sweet and very touching. great job.
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Very touching!! I love your work :-)
WAY TO GO!!
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O how beautiful! How sadly elegant is this heartfelt work of poetry. Brevity has always been quite captivating to me. This poem has heart, stark feelings seep from the page here. I actually feel the thud of your heart with these words.
Congratulations on winning the Bronze Cup here. The emotions are unnerving. Excellent!
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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Beautiful
And wings oneday you shall have for Angels will gather and smile at your beauty...I now do
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wow this was really so lovely.... scary to think I have to compete with this great poetry....
All the best!!
Becks
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thank you
for reading and for your sweet comment. I enjoy these type image writes. They get to me deep. Anyway, thank you so very much for taking the time to read this and the comment.
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Congratulations, your poem made it into the final draw of the "wings" contest!!
All the best for the finals
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Thank you so much
for commenting on this write. I enjoyed this contest and how it made me get a feeling of freedom for a moment. and how rare that is in my life these days. Again, thank you so much for your contest and releasing me from my troubles and woes. if only we could have wings if we needed, right?
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mmm ?? Still not reflecting that I commented I will just try again
Great poem!!! -
This is really so beautiful!!!
Thank you so much for entering! I really enjoyed reading this!
Good luck!!
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