Sparkling stars
on wavy surfaces,
soft wrap
around feet,
gentle push,
slight swing,
to get you out
of your routine.
Roar of unison
of drops from all over,
overriding the cocaphony
of my soul,
I raise my hands
with eyes closed
to beckon the peace
deep within.
Author notes
Prompt:water
In a list
A contest entry
- Elemental, My dear Watson by lie.
860 points, ended December 1, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I closed my eyes after reading to enjoy the images that were still floating by on the shore before stepping out of the water. This is a very lovely piece you have written here and it brightened up my morning more than my words can say. Very descriptive and such fluidity. Good luck in the contest and keep writing poet. I love it. seamaiden ♥
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Thank you so much for your lovely words and wishes..I am glad I brightened someone's day and that someone is you.
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