I'm walking, singing
have sun to my front
so hot, so brilliant
feel fire on the surface of skin
so hot, so kissing
like if you were.
In distance, distant
It's sea in horizon
in her, for right
Where soul hides
Wanting, waiting
This sea you are
Can the night have another color
The wind can be more cold
moon can climb the sky
already going down river …
In mouth of river, revolt
close the eyes, think about you
So near, when I wake
There's a soul to my front
So hot, kissing
For right you are
The moon can climb sky
clouds night covering with an awning
Prune darkness being like tar
I found you again
I'm walking, singing
I had the sun to my front
So hot, shining
That longing left me
Forever,
For right
My Love you are.
Author notes
prompt: love song
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This is first song that I write ever.
A contest entry
- Serenade by second-born.
600 points, ended November 23, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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Oh my…I bet you enjoy your walk under the sun when you finally have your lover with you…thank you for sharing an awesome write…
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