Illusions in Energy

Incasing wonder
Worlds of colors
Reds, of desires
Yellows, of bliss

And the tip, blue
For the understanding of it all
The illusions decay
It slowly withers away
Lifting and riseing in small
Wonderous fragments of light
What is it that i seek of this Illusion
What is it I seek from my desires
Never understanding such an ostounding energy
Yet it warms you, fills you with energy
But cautious to touch, for this energy is never a ally

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DrunkenRam
November 21, 2007
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Guilty
Never an ally, questionable, I really like this.
dragonjwp
November 15, 2007

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I really like this. It sounds great. You might want to think about the last three lines though. You can follow "energy" in a little curving line stright down. It kinda breaks the flow up somewhat. Other than that I Loved it.