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Hello?

In the dark I wait
I call in vain
No one hears my screams
No one hears me cry
It's hard to know
What I will become
I've changed so much
I Tore apart my soul
I left myself broken
Now I work in solitude
Trying to piece together
What I was
So I will have something to be

Author notes

Hello By: Evanescence is by far the most tuching song I have ever heard and the only song after being played over 1000 in my stereo and mp3 I still love to listen to

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I would like it if you would help me correct any typos im kinda bad about them :S

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  • Aiyoris Maryian
    November 15, 2007

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    I LOVE EVANESCENCE! Hello is touching, especially since it was written about her sister. I really like the last four lines. I may have to quote you on that one day. Thanks for entering!


  • Fearful - Death
    November 15, 2007
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    Wow, Thats A Good Song, And Good Write