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Brick Journal

I write down words

Meaningless to me
Meaningful to you

Meaningful to me
Meaningless to you

What does it matter?

My Journal says what it needs to
My Journal speaks what I can't say
It reveals what I need to see
It knows me better, than you.

So you Search

Searching for words
Upon Words of endless

Of Endless Words Upon
Paper you search for

So I have to be careful now.

Of what I write down in my Journal
Because everything I write there is me
And everything I can not say
Because I'm too unsure of it

In this Brick Journal

My words are powerful
Stuck forever like concrete

Stuck forever like concrete
My words are powerful

They can easily be used against me or for me.

This is why I hide precious words
This is why I hide my journal
This is why I hide me
From you and the rest of the world.

So I will never be hurt by my concrete words

Words are too valuable too meaningful
Much Too meaningful for anyone to use stupidly

If stupidly used the meaning will change
Words are too valuable to misconstrue.

Use them carefully, you can't take them back.

Author notes

Brick Journal

I made up my own style for this one.

Oh and I counted 37 Lines even though the count for this says 53...I think it's counting the spaces in between too...for some weird reason. ^^

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  • leslielovesthomas
    November 16, 2007

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    OMG

    I absolutely loved this! I can relate to this word for word. Amazing write! I love the direction you went with the prompt :-) Keep on writing! Best of luck to you in the contest and thank you so much for sharing!!!

    Leslie


  • artis gold member
    November 15, 2007

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    oh, we are prisoners of our words,

    of our world of scripted thoughts, spilled from our souls in the wee hours, we can cut or heal, we can inspire or turn awy the masses, we are the voices of the god's flowing, as well as the wicked whispers of the demons taunting, we are poets, and we need to carefully craft our thoughts, and be remembered as a pro found in awe inspiring books most profound....loved this girl, and I love your work as well, just don't get over here often enough to see your smiling contented image and fell your heart played out between lines of wonder..~~~Artis

  • when she loved me
    November 15, 2007

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    Different here, it's like writing as you say, words and it's power, oh it can kill and destroy, help and abuse...


  • Ashleigh London
    November 14, 2007

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    I liked this. The words you say are so real to me. I have felt the same things before. I haven't kept a journal in YEARS for the reasons you said in this but... yeah... well done baby girl! Good luck in the contest.
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