Having known you for many years
you're someone who I sacrificed
my life for - an abundance of tears
form - as death itself had surfaced,
making it seem a whole lot better
Than living was, instead it gives
You - In the shape of a letter,
Sealed approval knowing it lives
In my name - not owned by the devil,
For you alone to benefit for always
Announced from will for you to revel
All its entirity for future days.
A contest entry
- Which One Would You Do?? by ClassicallyBroken.
550 points, ended November 15, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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interesting... quite poetic, 'specially given the topic... beautifully and eloquently expressed... not cold, as I would expect such a piece to be...
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That is the best thing one can do is secure your loved ones future,so they can relax after the finality of the loved one passing, thank you for being aware of the demise of someone in passing, good luck in this contest...mm
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goodness
this is splendid , beautiful words as always , relatable yet not so much , hard to explain , but i loved it !
~ ♥ Rena ♥ ~ p.s. good luck in the contest
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endearing young man, you know how to write letters too!
You never cease to amaze me with your magic mind. Good luck in the contest. I'm sure this is a winner.
smile,
Judy.
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wow this is good i hope to c more stuff like this from you
i love you
your good friend (i think)
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Awesome Write.
Very powerfully penned here within poet!
Thanks for sharing, and I wish you well in the contest!
Peace, Timothy
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