The end of the line
I shall cook for you no more
One last gesture now
A contest entry
- You Don't Like the Dinner I Fixed? OKAY!! Take that and that! by Melodies.
600 points, ended November 16, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked the hidden meaning behind
ne last gesture,"
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A very telling haiku...
Exactly on the topic. Quite amazing how so few words can tell a whole story. 
Very fine writing... 
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Good,
I like this one, and with no cooking, oh no, that is punishment indeed.. Thanks for sharing, very creative. Peace, and shine on poet.
-Timothy
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