Pampered the flower rests her beauty upon pillowed dreams,
Sensuality to ask her need within the garden bared,
Soft unblemished, the petals to gift the dew,
Perfumed, exhilarated, unwrapped the rose unto its thirst,
Soft her skin escapes to moisten, and each pore to ask a kiss?
Quivered within the tingle,
Tantalized folds to gasp in circular motions,
Fantasies to free as slender fingers delve,
And Sap to rise, upon the sultry satiny sheets of passion,
Woman drives the need to fill her want to satiate,
Pouting, petting, pulsing, probing,searching,
The rose its petals radiate,
To bloom her need complete!
In a list
A contest entry
- Winner Takes All #1 [Erotica] by Manda Kathryn.
600 points, ended November 15, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Erotic Pleasures by Jonathan Wikkins.
525 points, ended June 1, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shivering In Delight by Heavenly Angel.
575 points, ended November 6, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sizzling Hot by Fire-Fly.
500 points, ended November 25, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a beautifully written poem - very sensual, very descriptive and full of wonderful imagery.
"Perfumed, exhilarated, unwrapped the rose unto its thirst,
Soft her skin escapes to moisten, and each pore to ask a kiss?"
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest. -
Soooo very wonderfully and beautifully passionate...wow!
I LOVE this!
It just sends shivers and chills of anticipation through your reader
Thank you for sharing and good look to you!
Whew!
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Oh darling this was awesome.
LOved it and deserved more than silver well here
aint the same but
s all i can do
Passions
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And a Rose does bloom within the garden of my life.
MUWAAAAAA! -
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arent you lucky or what lol
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This is a great write!! I love it!!
Tantalized folds to gasp in circular motions,
Fantasies to free as slender fingers delve,
And Sap to rise, upon the sultry satiny sheets of passion,
Woman drives the need to fill her want to satiate,
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And now I to blush again,
another excellent write, Keith. -
the imagery and metaphor you used are incredible!
great piece!
good luck in my contest, and thanks for entering!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
Nice poem but for these contests they have to rhyme.
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Thanks for the comment hun!
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Breathless, to lovely for words.
Oh how it would be to watch from the
outside window a scene as this.
Well done, as always.
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Exquisite!
What eloquence and passionate delight this was.
I loved the elegant way you described masturbating.
You painted a picture of erotic enchantment that
rose from mear sex to love making and romance.
Very good work here. Bravo!
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G'Day Keith ♥
*sighs* What a write ... oh the sensuality of this write filled my sense full of roses in bloom !
Loove this!
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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