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In pieces:
Afterlife's parchment
scribbles memories
taken partially.
Font-
abstractly written
using soul's tongue.
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Author notes
Written November 14, 2007
A contest entry
- burnt umber: a still life by Cat.
700 points, ended November 29, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Result Of Boredom: A "Whatever" Contest by Exodus.
525 points, ended January 25, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short and beautiful, as is so much of your work. I couldn't find a thing to give a critical comment on. Thank you
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i really like the idea of this piece very much- i like the abstraction of ideas and pacing of them- as related to the prompt- nicely done
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i judge poetry by the degree of difficulty of the undertaking and this is an ambitious attempt, some very strong ideas and images... not sure it succeeds completely and i would encourage you to flesh it out slightly more but thanks for entering such a fine piece..
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Definitely lingers~ subtle use of the prompt, I really like that.
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i love the feeling you have in first part of this ...
i have known it well
good luck in the contest
i really liked this
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I love the image 'soul's tongue', wish I had thought of that one.
Really an interesting take on the prompt. I love the quiet of it.
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Abstract but has the hint of emotion that holds the reader to linger on the words, the softest whisper of the color used. Love, C
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OHHHHHH Splendid, this is the type of words that fit the picture dead on and lingers on in my mind.....EXCELLENT>>>good luck!
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