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Am I Lost?

Am I lost?
In a planned, designated world
I am a piece in a puzzle and
I fit in this place.

I fit, but my colours don't match.

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This is a very short poem about how i feel so different to everyone around me. I know i belong here but I'm just not the same as everyone else.

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  • White Raven 17
    November 14, 2007
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    This is so cool! I really like it. Great expression!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    A very well expressed piece you have shared here. I know sometimes I feel lost as well. Thanks for sharing, and keep on trying to find your way. Peace.

    -Timothy