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Rotating hope

Each mistrust
dwindles my hope into oblivion,
as time caresses it
to return to my heart,
until next time.

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  • penman gold member
    November 20, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 16, 2007
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    Good

    Hope is a good quality to posses.


  • Arizona Sunset
    November 14, 2007

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    This is a wonderful take on the prompt, and speaks volumes! I love this sissy, ~blessings always~ best to you in the contest


    • crimsondew
      November 14, 2007
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      Thanks so much dear SIS...Your wishes mean a lot, glad you like it!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    A very indepth piece to ponder on.
    A well expressed piece within the content
    So much said within few lines.

    Thanks for sharing you.
    Peace, Timothy


    • crimsondew
      November 14, 2007
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      Glad you see the depth here...Thank you for your lovely wishes.

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