Just one sly glance
across the ice cream chest.
Just one small chance
to tell me how you feel.
My heart leaps up
within my uniform.
I scoop a cup,
and tell myself to breathe.
A passing touch,
a whisper in my ear,
gives me... ooooo... such
a tantalizing thrill...
Yes, our romance
is sweetness in itself.
Yet our rich dance
around this ice cream shop-
Is fudge on top
of the triple scoop
jamocha almond fudge sundae...
That is us.
Author notes
edit:in second stanza- changed will to tell. took out as
A contest entry
- P.I.F Quickie by JustxThexBeginning.
900 points, ended November 16, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
you know the drill...
Comments
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yes it is... lol... whoo... i got chills... lol... this was really good... it focused on all the things that i feel when we're at work, so good job... thank you for entering and i wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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Hot stuff ... yummy for sure
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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