Embracing in each others arms
As moonbeams dance across the walls,
I rest my head upon your chest
And listen to you breathe.
Whispering into my ear
Sweet little love temptations
As comets swirl around and about
Into the dark erotic sky.
Breaking out into light kisses
Up my neck then to my lips
Tickling and gentle.
Playful and star-lit,
The light in your eyes
Penetrate the depths of my heart
As you stroke me tender.
And so I surrender
A part of me to you
To hold dearly
A piece of my heart.
A contest entry
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650 points, ended November 22, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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Beautifully written
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Nicely said
Thanks for your comments.
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it's a very romantic poem. very sweet. but i feel like i've read so much of this before. Yes, it is hard to write a unique love poem nowadays..... lol
But i did enjoy it. it flows very well :-)
thank you for entering
best,
Albasou -
Beautiful write. I liked the second stanza the best especially the part about the comets and the sky. It made me think of it as a metaphor, like when sparks fly between two people. Good luck in the contest.
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