Do you melt in the middle
like Belgian truffles...
or trickle like heated licorice??
Is it just the ice cream between my teeth
making me shiver
&& the sickly sweetness
making my stomach turn?
Or are you just as sweet as all of that;
&& just as tasty?
Author notes
it's kinda fluffy... not my usual genre at all.
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The line "do you melt in the middle" is just so gorgeous and imginative
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G'Day mate
♥
I was almost confused reading this til I saw the contest it's entered in ... Great take on the prompt
Delicious
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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it may have not been your genre, but it made me smile... lol... i love the last line!!! just as tasty??!! lol... makes me wonder... haha... now, i have a lot to wonder about... the ice cream or the guy??? what's the right answer? thanks for entering... best of luck in my contest...
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