My spirit took a dip into a dimension of awe.
Awakening my soul in the
rebirth of elemental ecstasy.
As I was transformed into the winds
of a spiraling breeze.
On top of the oceans depths I did ride
with the ferocity of the gods.
Whipping the waves with my celestial
wings of infinite power.
The creatures of the deep emerged
with vitality and vigor.
As they trailed my path of
exhilerating majesty like a convoy
of rugged riders.
Orca the whale and his nemesis
the leviathan ascend from the
mighty waters.
Taking flight in mid-air and
rotating with aviating wonder.
The waves took note as they rose
to lofty heights, and clapped
their hands in salutation
of this glorious spectacle.
In a surge of magnificent I
metamorphorsis into a whirling
wind of turbulence.
The clouds blackened and the
skies cried out with lightning
bolts and thunder.
Amidst this tempestuous gathering
of atmospheric discord,
I glimpsed the eternal power.
Overcome by the humbling notion
of this awesome responsibilty,
I became calm.
As my mind began to understand
the great burden of deity.
I reverted to humanly form
and blessed the creator of
the universe.
A contest entry
- "Cosmic Consciousness" AKA "Enlightenment" by BluesMan.
660 points, ended December 5, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for entering my contest The imagery was very nice And I enjoyed reading this poem, but it was a write of the perception of "Cosmic Consciousness" Not the actual experiance "Orca the whale" was a dead give away.
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mushy
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An incredible roalercoaster ride through your words. This is pulsating with energy and light and I love that it's so amazingly unique.
Peace Georgia
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So very nicely done!
I love this side of you; one I don't normally get to see
This is a great piece, my friend!
Wishing you all the very best!!
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