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"Towards the gallows, innocence has no name"



He told me.
That innocence and Identity
should disappear with death.
That suicide was paint stripper
for the soul.

He told me all of this
while I slept.
In his arms none the less.


I only have one thing to say.


          SOMEONE'S BEEN WATCHING TOO MUCH FIGHT CLUB.

Author notes

quote at the top! it made me think of the bit in fight club where project mayhem think that in death people have a different name... so i twisted it and tried to add some humour in the last line.

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  • Beautifully Poetic
    November 14, 2007

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    totally like omg wikked awesome, wikkedly rad!!! lol ok now that ive have a weird moment....good work keep penning


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    November 14, 2007
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    prompt::
    "Towards the gallows, innocence has no name"