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Dark Temptation

I see you in the dark
Staring at me with those sexy black eyes
Wanting me to want you
but i will no be fooled by your dark temptation


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  • AyitaDaratranzanoff
    November 30, 2007
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    mmm,i love this very sensual.


  • DarkestNight3 gold member
    November 28, 2007
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    Awesome Read!! ty for sharing it with me

  • AyitaDaratranzanoff
    November 27, 2007
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    i love it


  • Sinnastarr silver member
    November 15, 2007

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    This was a good quote. A lot of passion in this piece.
    Well done. I can also feel your strength here.
    Thank you so much for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck.

  • Beautifully Poetic
    November 14, 2007

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    definitely quite mysterious and sassy, dark temptation this in itself you can't help but want to reAD...good work
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