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Snowy Night

Crystalline white
Silver rushes
Black heaven

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  • Lo Justin
    November 19, 2007

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    Short, of course. And sweet. The "rush" verb is nice here, I really felt snow flurries flying by my face in a cold winter wind. Those nights can feel very hollow, with the deep blackness and the solitude that fresh snow affords. Nicely done.

  • Agent of Purgatory
    November 15, 2007
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    Silver rushes

    a great use of winters forgoten color.

    I find that people who need vivid color tend be easily led to false Happy.I suffer seasonal depression in the summer,I miss the winters Silver rushes,people tucking in for the season mentally and physicially.
    i feel that in this Haiku.Well written QM.

    Cheers,
    Dabbler