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Meant To Be (Monorhyme)

We were meant to be
You and me for eternity
With bliss. euphoria and ecstasy
Sans sadness, ever romantic reverie.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 19, 2007
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    Thanks for editing and for entering it into my contest


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 15, 2007
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    Please, I love this, but it needs editing, one word more, please