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Real eyes realize real lies,
I posess no fake tears,
She sees through me.

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  • Poet Muse silver member
    May 21, 2008
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    Brilliant!!!

    I clearly see what you're honestly saying here. Great job!!! Peace, Cyn


  • StarvingAuthor
    November 15, 2007
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    wonderful.

  • HaleyMary
    November 14, 2007

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    Beautiful write. This makes me think of how no matter what people say, other people can always tell how they really feel by just looking at their eyes. Good luck in the contest.