Shrouded in human body
I am blind
Cannot hear
Or feel
Yet outside time
Something stirs
An oracle
Dances around the periphery
Of my sensitive self
Key elements of life
Containing blazing light
Are unlocked
Within
A memory
Of you all
Whispering
“We will never leave you”
Vibrates through me
My answer
“Who am I?”
Rings in perfect pitch
You hear...
I know...
I am you
Enigmatic lilt to my lips
Lingers through this life time
For I have risen
Author notes
The ones I'm addressing in the third and forth stanzas are those voices that our inner selves hear but our physical ears are deaf to. Those telepathic celestial beings who surround us.
'I am born of the Word;
I am made of the Word;
I am spoken by the Word;
I am the Word incarnate;
One Word - one phrase -
one universe - One Word.' Balldinger
A contest entry
- "Cosmic Consciousness" AKA "Enlightenment" by BluesMan.
660 points, ended December 5, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Golden Poems (pre-write quickie) by JM Kenyon.
450 points, ended December 22, 2007, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Absolutely beautiful write. There isn't a lot more I can say aout this because it appeals to me in all aspects. Excellent sound manipulations in the last stanza too!
s and best wishes ~Genie~
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beautiful~
Oh this is beautiful sweet sis of mine
It flows perfectly well and weaves in with the physical
and the spiritual dwelling within as well
I saw you got Gold on this poem and I can certainly see why...
You deserved it....I loved it...
Love you too and hope you come give my new ones a read as well too
Hugs n love
Your sis
Susan~~~
Perfect
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we will never leave you ...we will never leave you come home x
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beautiful... lyrical... a lovely flow... I love the final stanza...
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oh
aww man
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You captured the essance of what I was looking for. A merging of the physical and the spiritual mind that dwell within. I could really feel the connection in this write. It gave me another glimpse of what I had possesd for only a moment, but afforded me
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and in his power I still feel his presence in song and prayer. Carry him wherever you travel and allow others to feel His presence as well, just as this poem.
Tamara
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WOW! I was defintiely enlightened by this one. This blew me away. The depth of your words. The intense meaning within each line. All I can say it 'WOW!' Keep the ink flowing and thanks for sharing this. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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Thank you for sharing your enlightenment through your magnificent pen with all of us. This is absolutely brilliant and you left me with my jaw sitting in my lap here.
You took my breath away and I'm still trying to find it in the words I leave for you. I feel a karma so peaceful from your soul which you bared in this amazing piece. I wish you the very best, though this sounds golden to me. Love and God bless you always, in all ways. Joyce 
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